IB Writing Feedback for Grades 4–8 – Detailed, Teacher-Quality Support

From 54.81 C$ /h

I’m an experienced international school teacher with 8 years in the classroom, specializing in the IB PYP. I offer clear, structured feedback on essays and inquiry projects, using IB rubrics to guide improvement. My goal is to help students succeed in their writing assignments through detailed and thorough feedback.

What I provide:
Strengths and areas for improvement

Rubric-aligned comments (clarity, structure, coherence, grammar)

Actionable next steps for revision

Motivating feedback tailored to younger learners (Grades 4–8)

Why choose me?
Experienced international school teacher

IB PYP & MYP expertise

Feedback that is constructive, clear, and student-friendly

Fast and reliable turnaround

Extra information

bring a laptop

Location

Online from Cambodia

About Me

I am a native English speaker based in Phnom Penh, Cambodia from the United Kingdom. I have three years teaching experience with two years tutoring. I have experience teaching a range of different students from ages 5-18, from different backgrounds.

With five years of experience teaching IPC, I have developed an expansive understanding of inquiry-based learning. I aspire to broaden my understanding and skill set, seeking to expand this skillset with a new learning opportunity. My experiences and coaching in safeguarding have significantly enhanced my ability to empathize with students, allowing me to be more emotionally attuned to their needs. This deeper understanding has improved communication, enabling me to connect more effectively with students.

Education

P.G.C.E. (Master's Level)
Bachelor's Degree

With five years of experience teaching IPC, I have developed an expansive understanding of inquiry-based learning. I aspire to broaden my understanding and skill set, seeking to expand this skillset with a new learning opportunity. My experiences in coaching in safeguarding have significantly enhanced my ability to empathize with students, allowing me to be more emotionally attuned to their needs. This deeper understanding has improved communication, enabling me to connect more effectively with students.

Experience / Qualifications

8 years teaching

I have eight years of experience working with primary students, during which I have developed a strong foundation in teaching young learners. Additionally, I have taught beginner adults, helping them to build their skills from the ground up. My experience also extends to teaching middle school students, allowing me to engage with a wider age range and adapt my teaching methods accordingly.

Age

Children (7-12 years old)

Teenagers (13-17 years old)

Adults (18-64 years old)

Student level

Beginner

Intermediate

Advanced

Duration

60 minutes

The class is taught in

English

Skills

Essay writing

Writing

Vocabulary

Availability of a typical week

(GMT -05:00)

New York

Online via webcam

Mon

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Sun

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04-08

08-12

12-16

16-20

20-24

Native Speaking English Teacher (Beginner to Advanced)

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I am an native speaking English teacher with four years of experience teaching, and 2 years of tutoring experience.

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Developing phonic awareness- 'Recognizing sounds'.
Comprehension
Fluency

For intermediate speakers I will focus on:

Vocabulary expansion
Improving fluency

For advanced speakers I will focus on:
Specific topic areas, such as business, in which we can refine our approach to your particular preferrred area of study.

I firmly believe making mistakes when learning is positive.
I take a flexible and holistic approach taking into the students individual needs.
I am happy to discuss my experience and educational background with you if required.

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Comprehensive exam preparation focusing on all four skills: listening, speaking, reading, and writing

Clear explanations of French grammar and vocabulary relevant to the DELF/DALF exams

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Bonjour 👋

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🤔 Let me guess...

❤️ You love the people, you love the culture, and you wish for nothing more than to speak Egyptian Arabic freely...

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⚡ How to keep your motivation...
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