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College Essay Writing Strategies and Feedback (for application to universities in the U.S.)
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As a high school English teacher and private tutor for college coaching, I have 7 years of experience helping students understand the best strategies to access the universities that are right for them.

This course will discuss the required "Common App" essay that most schools in the United States ask for in their application process. We will read and analyze the strategies of successful college essays together, while discussing ideas and directions for the students to take personally. I will educate them on the writing methods, while offering revision suggestions along the way.
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Google Docs will work best for digital feedback.
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Online from United States
About Me
Hello all! I am already proud that you are exploring these steps to take control of your future!

I have been teaching English in New Jersey for 7 years, with experience in grades 9-12. I teach college preparatory classes, along with AP Language & Composition. Privately, I tutor students to navigate the "college essay" question on the Common App website, or we can use a specific school's prompts to tailor their responses to fit the task! We will look at different essay writing strategies in order to find what works for you, then discuss your experiences, interests, and unique qualities that are sometimes difficult to find in ourselves right away. I guarantee you have a story worth telling, and one that a university will be lucky to hear!
Education
Currently enrolled in the University of Cape Town's post-graduate program in Development Studies. I hold 2 Bachelors Degrees in English and Secondary Education from Rutgers University and William Paterson University. Graduating with a 4.0 and top of my class.
Experience / Qualifications
I am a Certified Teacher with Advanced Standing in K-12 English.
I have taught in NJ public schools for 7 years.
I am a certified AP (through College Board) and International Baccalaureate Teacher
Age
Teenagers (13-17 years old)
Adults (18-64 years old)
Student level
Beginner
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Duration
60 minutes
The class is taught in
English
Availability of a typical week
(GMT -04:00)
New York
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